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Green Mountain - Short Story

Updated: Dec 31, 2023

J. J. Hanna © 2018

9:07 PM

Kelly: Hey, can you call me? I’m walking home and I’m drunk and I think someone’s following me

Lou: I can’t call right now, but keep texting me

Kelly: K…

Kelly: He’s definitely following me

Kelly: Should I call the police?

Lou: You feel that threatened?

Kelly: I’m drunk my judgement isnt the best rn

Lou: You can’t be too drunk if you know that

Kelly: Hes getting closer

Kelly: Lou im scared

Kelly: Hel dffhisoie fdsh

Lou: You there?

Lou: Don’t kid with me rn, Kel.

Lou: Kelly?

Lou: Hey! Answer me!

Lou: Aaaannnssswwerrr meeeeeeee

Lou: I’m scared for you

Lou: Should I call the police?

Lou: Come on, Kel. You’ve had your fun. Respond

Lou: I’m going to check in with you again in an hour. I need you to answer me.

Lou: Not want. Need.

10:12 PM

Lou: Kelly. Answer. Me.

Lou: I’m calling the police.

Kelly: SOS

Kelly: Green Mountain jkdd

Lou: What does that mean?

Lou: Kelly!

Lou: Kel?

Kelly: I’m fine. C u tomorrow.

Lou: Explain

Kelly: Did you call the police

Lou: No…

Kelly: Good

Kelly: Talk to you in the am, need sleep

9:28 AM

Ally: Have you seen the news?

Lou: No… why?


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Please note: This is a work of fiction. Any similarity to real life events is unintended by the author.


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J. J. Hanna is a writer and reader from Colorado. She loves suspense stories above all else, and is currently working on a debut novel of her own. When she's not writing, you can find her cuddling with a cat, drinking a caffeinated beverage, and watching one of her favorite shows. Go find her on social media @authorjjhanna to keep track of her most recent reads, current adventures, and to get the most up to date news on all things publishing.

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